moon's audition - part twenty-one [FINAL]

lol guess who ran out of time to do backgrounds, feasible dialogue and proper resolutioonnn..

i think, to my discredit, that i was probably more preoccupied with explaining/exhibiting/vindicating the details on her FT bio (which the third-from-final panel was obvo meant to punctuate) than i was actually getting moon to the tournament in a narrative sense and would have been better served plopping her on FISTPUNCH much sooner than i did.

i think i managed to go some way to showcasing her strengths and weaknesses as detailed in the bio (no sense of touch - being punched, chainsawed, sliced, etc., crushing weight - pinned coral down, zero inhibitions - shat outside, mouthy - calling everyone slags, etc., etc.) but i was def a letdown on getting to the business end of the audition and for that i both apologise and acknowledge the likely result that is my attempt's failure!

PART TWENTY: fav.me/d7x24ny

PART ONE (lol): fav.me/d7nqmjs